Chapter 2 Chinese Trader - dawsonhkab
 
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           It was time to escape. Wait who is that opening the door, it was some Chinese teen and out of the blue he said "Lets go" and from that point I know he was a Chinese trader.The first thing he did was give me a gun then brought me out side then before I could say anything he through me in the car 
and we drove away. I couldn't say a word, I just stared but then we stopped at a abadon shed. When we went inside I was pushed into a wall then kicked and by the look in his eyes I could tell that he hated Russians but he did save me so I spared his life, he did give me a gun. So we both decided that we would help eachother find our familys so he took out a gun and I took out mine and we set of to find our familys, first Yuko's family.
Andy
3/9/2010 06:37:03

It was time to escape. Wait, who is that opening the door? It was some Chinese teen and out of the blue he said, "Lets go," and from that point I knew he was a Chinese trader.

(How do you know he is a Chinese trader? you should describe this some more to help the reader understand)

The first thing he did was give me a gun, then brought me out side. Before I could say anything he threw me in a car and we drove away. I couldn't say a word, I just stared but then we stopped at a abandoned shed. When we went inside I was pushed into a wall then kicked and by the look in his eyes I could tell that he hated Russians, but he did save me so I spared his life, he did give me a gun. We both decided that we would help each other find our families so he took out a gun and I took out mine and we set of to find our families. First Yuko's family.

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